Writing Competition_S2_Champion

Memory Bread 2A Patrick Ansell

Doraemon came to me. He gave me a gift.

Inside a box, ’twas just what I wished.

“Anki-Pan” is one name; Memory Bread the other.

What mysteries it holds, you all may wonder.

Is there something to remember? Important things to memorize?

Then use the Memory Bread, and you’ll surely be mesmerized.

Memory bread is convenient. It’s quite easy to use.

Just put it on the data, which you don’t want to lose.

Then eat the bread for breakfast. Anytime will do.

What you ate will stay with you for your whole life. It’s true!

Writing Competition_S2_1^st Runner-up

The Hero that saved Doraemon’s voice by the ‘Anywhere Door’ 2C Tam Yuet Yi, Juliett

Doraemon ‘Now, may I present, Juliett Tam, the extraordinary girl who saved my voice, and all of my beloved fans,’ I proudly walked up the stage along with the “Anywhere Door” on my hand. The audience clapped. They screamed like I was a star. I smiled as if I was having the most gorgeous time of my life. And, of course, at that time, I was.

 It was my birthday. I invited Doraemon to my party. We played games, ate cakes and sang karaoke. Soon enough, it was the time they gave me presents. I was so excited. I had wonderful things from my friends. Yet, the most unforgettable thing was when Doraemon pulled out the “Anywhere Door” from his pocket, and said it was my birthday gift. I was very happy. Excited to play with it, Doraemon suddenly fainted on the floor.

 I quickly called the ambulance and Doraemon was sent to the hospital. After he had some sleep, I asked him how he felt. He tried to talk, but I couldn’t hear a sound. His voice was gone! I was so depressed. I asked him how I could help. He wrote it on a piece of paper, saying that there must be something wrong with Lam Po-chuen his voice actor. That meant I needed to get to the past and saw what had happened.

 I started to think of a way to get me to the past. Suddenly, I remembered the “Anywhere Door”. I rushed back home as fast as I could.

 I got back home, and ran to the door and said ‘take me to Lam Po-chuen’s home one day ago’. The door started to shake. It twisted and turned. A few seconds later, it stopped. I opened the door, and I walked in. I was in Lam Po-chuen’s house! I quickly searched where he was, and I saw him in his bed, feeling sick. I talked to him and asked him what I could do to save him. He said he was sick because of diabetes. Sadly, diabetes couldn’t be cured nowadays. So I decided to go to the future to find the right cure and save him.

 I said to the Door “Take me to a hospital 30 years later!’ The door started to shake. It twisted and turned. I walked in the door, and went to a hospital 30 years later. I ran to a doctor, begging him for medicine. I finally got it, and went back to Lam Po-chuen’s house. He was very sick, sicker than he was before. His face was pale; his lips were grey. I quickly gave him the medicine and a cup of water. He took the medicine and slowly he got better. I was so glad for what I saw, and I saved Doraemon’s voice! I quickly told the Door to go back to the hospital that Doraemon was in. I went back and he was as fine as before. Lam Po-chuen also came and he said I would be awarded!

Now, I proudly walked up the stage with the Anywhere Door on my hand. The audience cheered. They cheered.

And I was enjoying the most gorgeous time of my life!

S2_Writing Competition_2^nd Runner-up

A Letter to Doraemon 2D Ma Man Hei

I walked in a crowded but quiet place. I found a seat which no one was sitting in and then I took out my revision notes.

‘Oh no! It is so annoying! There are so many things to remember!’ I said.

 Why do I feel annoyed? It’s because this week is exam week! I feel nervous because I am weak at some subjects, like Chinese Language and History and Culture. I have so many things to remember for these two subjects.

 ‘Ok, I know I need to relax at this moment. It will be my birthday soon. It is my birthday two days later. Let me think about what gift I will get this year...um...a watch? A new school bag? Or a new pet?’ I think.

 ‘Bling!’ Suddenly a terrible blue thing appeared on my book.

‘Hey you! I am Doraemon, I am from the future. I know it is your birthday two days later. So I want to give you a gift for your birthday! What do you want?’ the terrible blue thing said.

 ‘Oh! I see...I find it hard to remember things about Chinese and History. What should I do?’ I asked.

 ‘I can help you! Just wait for a minute...’ Doraemon said. ‘Ta-da! I finally found it! Oh, what a messy bag it is!’ He shouted.

 ‘What is it?’ I asked.

 ‘It is “Memory bread”! This bag of bread can help you, I think...’

 ‘How I can use it? Just eat it? Or I need to do something with it?’

 ‘First, place a piece of bread against your notes, your books, and anything else that you want to remember.’ Doraemon replied.

 ‘And then eat it?’

 ‘Yes, of course you can eat it for your breakfast. You will remember things easily after that.’

 ‘Thanks for your help Doraemon! May I kiss you once? Please!’ I said.

‘What? No, no, no! You are very disgusting! Get far away from me! Your yucky, silly person!’ Doraemon cried, and then disappeared.

At the end, I got all my exams passed. Now I have to write a thanksgiving letter to Doraemon.

 ‘Flat B, 14/F, Moon Terrace, Japan.’